They are Here

 A writing prompt challenge from Write on Edge: Take a look at the photo below and write. Don’t think too hard, just write what comes. Fiction or non-fiction. Don’t spend too long. Have fun! is to write whatever comes to mind about the picture below.  

My neighbor Barbara Castlebridge believes in omens and signs no one else sees and if you are unlucky and bump into her in Lee’s Grocery she will stop you and tell you about mysterious vegetables that herbs that cure cancer or warn you that the end of the world as we know will happen this year because the great Mayan civilization calendar ends on 12-12-12. She chats about urban legend and pseudu scientific discovery as if they were true. She believes the city of Atlantis lays beneath the Bermuda triangle and that Earth has been visited by others, mysterious others, from another planet.  My teenage son Jasper usually sniggers when Barbara launches into one of her monologues when we’re at Lee’s Grocery trying to figure out what we’re going to have for dinner or breakfast. Last week he abandon me in the cereal aisle while I was reading the nutrition label on a box of Captain Crunch. He escaped while Barbara was still talking and I was still trying to read. But not today. Jasper stood close beside me and listened.

“You saw them didn’t you?” Barbara said. I could see the whites of Barbara’s eyes grow big and I wondered if she had thyroid problems like Marty Feldman.

“Yah, I saw ‘em—the vapor trails,” Jasper said, “and they weren’t from a jet from the base. They were different.”

Barbara moved in closer and whispered, “They’re here. I know it. I can feel it. Can’t you?”

Jasper nodded in agreement. “Yes, Mrs. Castlebridge they are here.”
(10 min.)


5 thoughts on “They are Here

    1. I don’t think I meant that sentence to be a run-on, but there I was at work with precious minutes to spare for this quick, fun, prompt. Thanks for reading and reminding me to put something down for an hour before hitting that publish button.

  1. Reading the nutrition label on the packet of Captain Crunch! You must be desperate 🙂 But seriously, I loved how you got Jasper’s switch in mood (was he taking the piss or had he become a believer?), and I could see Barbara’s eyes widen…

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